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THE NEW NATIONAL ANTHEM SCOTLAND ( collective first line )

PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 10:50 pm
by ionnsaigh
Hand in hand together - an side by side we stand

Re: THE NEW NATIONAL ANTHEM SCOTLAND ( collective first lin

PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 10:56 pm
by Jock Strap
ionnsaigh wrote:Hand in hand together - an side by side we stand


United as brothers for the love of our land. 8)

PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:06 pm
by ionnsaigh
Pity we have sisters also jock - although I reckon something along similar lines :D

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 12:16 am
by Bobbie En Tejas
Brothers: 2: one related to another by common ties or interests

It works :mrgreen:

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 12:47 am
by general jack o'niell
sorry to be editing rather than adding but might this scan better?

united all as brothers

with our love for this land

i'll have a go at adding one to that, simple and obvious

"from the highlands to the lowlands"

"from port ellon to dunbar"

"united as one scotland"

"tho we be near or far" (sean connery wouldn't scan!!)

chorus

rise up, ye sons and daughters

come raise the standard high

and join as one, in freedoms song

our own, our dear Scotland


that bri-nylon enough for you?

if not, i'm keeping it and making up a tune on the black keys on the piano (try it, you can play any scottish tune you want)

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:12 pm
by ionnsaigh
we walk an weave oor country - the common theme of man

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:19 pm
by ionnsaigh
Thank you bobbie - you have just contributed to the National anthem of Scotland.

a man's man your not
American not Scot
a Yankee true an true
Scotland stands salutes
salutes the like o you.

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:54 pm
by bill
Who is a Scot?
by Gerry Haughey


Who heard the ancient battlecry?
A chieftans bloodied sword held high,
To a cloudy cross in the azure sky,
Who is a Scot?

Who saw proud Wallace's face?
Guardian of our Celtic race,
Slay tyrants with his sword and mace,
Who is a Scot?

Who smelt the blood and sensed the fear?
Who felt The Bruce's spirit near?
At Bannockburn who shed a tear?
Who is a Scot?

Who knew the pride felt at Arbroath?
Which freemen love and tyrants loathe,
To sign the pledge and take the oath.
Who is a Scot?

Who felt the shame and shivered cold?
Their heritage and their freedom sold,
For a wagonload of tainted gold,
Who is a Scot?

Who paid a heavy bloodsoaked toll?
So foreign powers could ne'er control,
My Gaelic heart and Celtic soul,
I am a Scot!

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:55 pm
by general jack o'niell
kind of hard to scan that one, i had to stop for a breath at contributed!!!!

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 6:10 pm
by general jack o'niell
that'll do for me bill, if it just had the word b@st@rds in it, it would be perfect

i am a scot, ya bass

might work

come o'er the border, if your willing

and don't forget your silver shilling

you won't take our cash when we're south

your sick relation, nil by mouth

yet ne'r refuse your share of spoil

ye steal by rape our scottish oil

then questions of the lothian kind

you treat us like we're dull of mind

your welcomes, overstayed i fear

yes, independance soon we'll cheer.



me, 5.09pm 13/03/08

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 7:43 pm
by ionnsaigh
It's hand and hand together - an side by side we stand
we walk an weave our country - this our mothers land
standing shoulder high with others - the brotherhood of man
Scotland stand united - our freedom now at hand

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 7:54 pm
by bill
"The brotherhood of man" were they not an English group ?


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bKAPVpA46o

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:23 pm
by ionnsaigh
Och well - back to the drawing board :D

PostPosted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:26 pm
by ionnsaigh
We will raise the scarlet standard high :oops:

PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:27 am
by general jack o'niell
with an islay malt and a dundee peh