Courier Lead Story 6/6/08
Surely the "Courier" can do better than the quality of journalism shown in their "Kintyre woman survives adder attack".
The first paragraph does not even make sense.
"She" is used 13 times in the short article. We are not told the lady's name although "Gloria" is mentioned at the beginning of the 5th paragraph.
I would normally hesitate to criticise anyone's work but even if this is a young fledgeling journalist starting his/her career, or even a student on work experience, I would have thought that there should be someone proof-reading and picking up such mistakes before the paper goes to print.
The first paragraph does not even make sense.
"She" is used 13 times in the short article. We are not told the lady's name although "Gloria" is mentioned at the beginning of the 5th paragraph.
I would normally hesitate to criticise anyone's work but even if this is a young fledgeling journalist starting his/her career, or even a student on work experience, I would have thought that there should be someone proof-reading and picking up such mistakes before the paper goes to print.